The thesis statement I've chosen for Essay 1 is the following:
Students can study more effectively by learning how to refresh themselves in various ways including talking with someone and laughing, taking a rest, and feeling nature.
Students can study more effectively by learning how to refresh themselves in various ways including talking with someone and laughing, taking a rest, and feeling nature.
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Students can study more effectively by learning how to refresh themselves in various ways including 1) enjoying conversation with others, 2) taking regular rests, and 3) having regular exercise.
Students can study more effectively by learning how to refresh themselves in various ways including talking with someone and laughing, taking a rest,
ReplyDeleteand feeling nature.
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Students can study more effectively by learning how to refresh themselves in various ways including 1) enjoying conversation with others, 2) taking regular rests, and 3) having regular exercise.